View
The misty
Mountains all around,
Like sleepy heads of children.
Wake
Up!
Behold the sunlit morning.
See the birds take wing—
O what a
Sight!
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With each Mirror Oddquain I’ve written, I have attempted to establish some sort of connection between the first and last words. In this one, view and sight are synonyms.
Scansion:
Mirror Oddquain — Two oddquains, where the second is reversed.
Syllabic structure: 1-3-5-7-1-1-7-5-3-1
An Oddquain is a Cinquain minus one syllable from each line.
Rhyme not required.
The Abundant Heart 
I love the image of a misty morning as a child waking up!! And I think you are amazing for tying the first and last word together as synonyms! Simply brilliant! ❤ ❤
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Thank you, Lynn. 🙂
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